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故事創作小書評審總結語

故事創作總評:

  1. 同學們都有極豐富的想像力,透過創作小書傳遞歷史、地理、傳統、神話等知識;內容變化多,故事的鋪陳也很創新,可惜大多數結尾都太過簡單,沒有呼應主題,相當可惜。
  2. 大部份的同學都有原創的概念,但部份同學採用著名作品的圖像,如:小王子,恐有侵權的問題。
  3. 絶大部份的作品美侖美奐,足見同學們對於藝術創作的投入與用心,但是要注意圖文是否一致。
  4. 在文法的運用上如用字、標點符號、時態的一致性都要特別注意。
  5. 有些篇幅過短,有論述環保的,有的只是將古典著作重新闡述一遍,如:孫悟空、桃太郎等,這些都不算創作。

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