2017 Sesame Street English 第十三屆尋找創作家

故事創作總評 : 同學們都有極豐富的想像力，透過創作小書傳遞歷史、地理、傳統、神話等知識；內容變化多，故事的鋪陳也很創新，可惜大多數結尾都太過簡單，沒有呼應主題，相當可惜。 大部份的同學都有原創的概念，但部份同學採用著名作品的圖像，如 : 小王子，恐有侵權的問題。 絶大部份的作品美侖美奐，足見同學們對於藝術創作的投入與用心，但是要注意圖文是否一致。 在文法的運用上如用字、標點符號、時態的一致性都要特別注意。 有些篇幅過短，有論述環保的，有的只是將古典著作重新闡述一遍，如 : 孫悟空、桃太郎等，這些都不算創作。

My Parent’s Job My father and mother are chefs. They open a restaurant in Shinshe. They sell deep fried duck’s heads and necks, stinky tofu, rice, noodles and soup. Every morning, they need to prepare the ingredients. They drive to a market in Dongshih to get the ingredients and bring them back to the restaurant. When they go back to the restaurant, they need to clean the food first. Then, they put the food in the pails. Third, they cook them in the pots. Then, they are ready. The restaurant open hours is from 3:30PM to 10:00PM. But actually that means you can’t order food after 10PM, but if you order the food before 10PM, you can still continue eating. When customers come, my father and my mother will cook together. There have 3 employees working in the restaurant and they are very busy. The employees will take the food to the customers and do the dishes. The finish everything at 11:00PM sometimes 12PM. Because some customers eat slowly. The restaurant has opened for

Don't give up! Eric One Monday afternoon, Eric walked along by the river. Suddenly, Eric heard a child screaming for help. He fell into the water. Eric wanted to help him, but Eric couldn’t. Just then, a brave man who looks like superman went past. He jumped into the river and saved the child. Eric thought to himself “I went to learn how to swim because I also to help people.” When Eric arrived home, Eric told Mom that he wanted to take swimming lessons. His mom agreed his demand. So from that day on, Eric went for swimming lessons. However, to learn swimming is not easy. First, you must learn how to hold breathe underwater. Then you must learn how to float, splash or kick and stay underwater. Next you must know how to use your hands and arms inside the water. Last, you must learn how to breathe without water coming into your mouth. The whole learning lessons lasted two months. Once Eric Stuck in water and ended up choking many times in a day. Eric felt li

My family trip One day, my family and I went traveling around Taiwan. We were very excited about the trip. First, we went to Hsiluo to buy some soy sauce. Only my father got out of the car. When he returned, we continued the trip. Net, we went to Taichung to eat lunch. There was a nice restaurant with many different foods. We ate noodles. After lunch, we spent two hours shopping. We bought a lot of things. We soon left for Nantou. Nantou had many beautiful places. We chose to visit a very long bridge. The next day, we went to Hsinchu to enjoy the famous meatballs. It was delicious. We also went to the amusement park. It was a lot of fun. We went to Yilan and stayed there for two nights. We ate at different restaurants and walked around the parks to enjoy the scenery. After that, we went to Haulien. We rode on the mountain roads. The views were very beautiful. When night came, we stayed at a hotel and watched TV. We were all very tired. For our last day of the t

My Dream! One day, when I slept, I had a dream. I dreamt that I was in a beautiful place in the sky. This place was where the gods lived. There were 12 gods. Each god had a sign representing. First, I met the god king. His name was Zeus. He ruled over all the gods. His sigh was an eagle. He taught me how to be a good leader. Second, I met Hera, she wife of Zeus. She was in charge of marriage and babies. Her sign is a rose. She taught me how to be a good mom. Third, I met Ares, the son of Zeus and Hera. He was in charge of fighting. His sign was a sword. He taught me how to protect others. Next, I met Athena. She was the sister of Ares. Her sign was an owl. She was the princess of knowledge and knew many different things. She taught me how to study better. After that, I met Hermes. He was in charge of business. His had many signs. He taught me how to be a good businessman Then, I met Apollo and Artemis. They were in charge of sun, moon, music and maidens. Artemi

The magic sword A long time ago, there was a graveyard and a magic sword which was hidden in it. The magic sword was taken care by a two-headed dragon which can shoot fire balls. The magic sword could make one’s of dream come true. Many people tried to get it, bur they couldn’t beat the dragon. They didn’t even come back because they were eaten by the dragon. A witch named Jessie had dark magic, but she wanted to be more powerful. She knew about the magic sword that was taken care by the two-headed dragon. She wanted to get it, but she only had a spear. She thought her dark magic is still not good enough. She went to many different mountains. Finally, she found a devil that could help her. It said ”I can make a deal with you. I can give you whatever you want as long as you give me your soul.” Jessie promised him she would do it. Jessie went to the graveyard, the two-headed dragon came out. She hide behind a tree to see what the dragon is doing. The dragon saw her and s

A Mirror Adventure One day, a fairy named Chloe played with her cat in a beautiful, big garden. They were very happy. Suddenly, Chloe found a little bottle with a note on it. “Don’t open it, or you will lose yourself.” Chloe felt so curious and still open it. Then, she was around with pink air quickly, that made her very nervous and dizzy. After a while, Chloe woke up, she lay down on the big, white fluffy bed. She saw a mirror on the wall. This mirror looked very old and dirty. Chloe knocked on the mirror twice. The mirror turned into bright. Suddenly, a force sucked her into the “Mirror World” In the mirror world, everything was opposite. All men wore the skirts and dresses, all women were strange and looked like men. Not only people, but also everything was opposite! Chloe walked along the street, everyone stared at her unfriendly because she was a black sheep here. All of a sudden, Chloe heard a terrible voice from a distance. It said, “She’s a witch! Take her into the

A Tale of Remembrance Tips : Choose a "Grandmother" and stick it in the pages of the book. One day, grandmother was frustrated because her grandchildren didn't like the food she cooked anymore. She decided to run away from home, and she started travelling around Taiwan. "I want to run away from home." First, she began in Taipei. She heard how famous Taipei 101 was, but she had never been. She went to the top floor to see the view of the city. While she was there, she could only think about how better it would be if her grandchildren were with her. Second, she headed south to Nantou. She visited the amazing Sun Moon Lake. She took a boat out on the water and saw the statue of nine frogs in the lake. This magnificent scenery brought back a memory of her husband's honeymoon at Sun Moon Lake fifty years ago, but sadly he died sixteen years ago. Third, she went to the Beigang Mazu Temple in Yunlin. This is a place where she played with her first

The Adventure of Khan Once upon a time, there was a boy named Khan. He like to adventure and he accepted challenges. One day, Khan saw a key on the floor. The key was shining. It was a Maggie key, but Kahn didn’t know it. He picked up the key and used it for guidance light. The key let him to a castle. Khan used the key to open the door. He saw three witches having a party. Khan hid behind the pillar. The witches didn’t see Khan. Khan thought about how to catch the witches. He planned to attract them and used a net and a rope to catch them. Khan said, “Where can I find a net and a rope?” He looked around the room and found a net and a rope. He was lucky to find a net and a rope. He needed them to make a trap. First, he tied the rope on the pillar. Net, he put the net next to the rope. Then, he ran out and shouted, “Hey, witches! Come and get me!” The three witches replied, “Who are you?” They got angry and cased Khan. Khan Jumped over the trap, but the th

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